Waitangi treaty grounds recount

In Te Maunga we have been learning to write a recount and we had to talk about our day. I think I did well on putting detail and paragraphs in my story.What I need to do better is I need to
put more punctuation in my story so t sounds better. Hope you like my story please comment and  like it.Here it is

“Woohoo!!!!!” The day came on Tuesday we went to waitangi treaty grounds. First we  lined up and then we started to  walk to waitangi. Then when we  got there  we got stickers and the lady told us what we had to do.

We walked   through the corridor   until we got to the tent and the man introduced us to the lady’s. Some  of us went to different activities.

The first game we played was the keti game with a shaky shell and I was first. I had a Yellow blindfolded  and a shaky keti I could hear the Keti shells shaking. I could feel the other person and I could hear people cheering for me.

Then we played Maui and Mato.The lady was called Briana There was some small rops to jump over. I could here Briana saying the words.

 After that we did some planting I could hear the birds chirping and I could smell Fresh air. Me and  Dayton did a tall tree Together.

Then my group went to did  some weaving We only got 20 minutes to do it we did not finish, I could hear people asking for help.

“I had a great and cool day at  waitangi treaty grounds..”